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« Reply #105 on: September 18, 2009, 10:44:11 AM »

                                            *  *  *

"The lido deck is now closing. The lido deck is now closing."

With a few strokes, Jennifer Ivy completed the last lane of her relaxing swim.
After the very successful presentation of the autopilot robot model design, she
had earned herself a one-week holiday trip on one of the more luxurious BnL
starliners, the Infinity. Infinite fun for less than infinite
money
, the commercials had said. And so far, Jennifer's expectations had
been more than fulfilled, especially because she did not have to pay any
money for it.

She climbed out of the pool and walked to her canvas chair. Just as she reached
it and settled down for a little nap before the ever-annoying "no splashing, no
diving" bot would complement her out, she heard a beeping noise emanating from
her sports bag. With an annoyed grunt she reached into it and produced a small
communication device.

There she was, half across the solar system, and still not safe from her
workplace, she pondered as the display told her who was calling.

"Mike, if this is anything short of a catastrophe, I'm gonna hang right up
again."

"Hey Jenny. Not exactly a catastrophe, but I'm quite sure you'll still want to
hear it. You know, there's that plant evaluator model you designed the chassis
for, right?"

A little uneasiness made itself felt. "Uh-oh, what happened to her? Don't tell
me they trashed her, like that out-of-control massage bot? I can still hear
Mendez' rant when he found his hovercar..."

"Nono, nothing like that. On the contrary. She's received a promotion. So to
speak the highest promotion a robot can ever hope for."

"Mike, if you don't want me to strangle you right thru this hyperspace
connection, you're gonna tell me..."

"Hey hey, calm down, Jenny," Michelson chuckled. "What will your little white
baby think of her godmother?"

As Michelson continued his explanation, Jennifer wondered if the Captain might
turn the ship around right away if she were to ask really nicely.

                                            *  *  *

"Daryl, hm? Interesting choice, a male name for a female voice," Alyx wondered.

"Yeah, sounds a little strange, but I think I've seen Daryl as a female
name too. Anyway, it quite fits. So, Daryl, your sole directive is to follow a
preset flight pattern?"

The little robot nodded.

"Odd, why would anyone build such an advanced model and give it no task but to
fly around?"

"Yeah, and even more so," Chris comtemplated, "fly around on the Fermilab
campus. Daryl, why did you leave your sisters and come back to us?"

The robot's eyes took on a sad expression. "Lost," she trilled.

"Lost? You mean you lost your companions?"

Daryl shook her head. "Daryl lost. Path incorrect."

"Hmm. Her flight pattern must have been misprogrammed, and she can't find the
way back home," Alyx pondered.

The little robot nodded several times.

"Really odd. Daryl, do you know where your flight path originated?"

"Site Thirty-Nine."

"Site 39 here on the Fermilab campus?" Alyx turned to Chris. "That's right in
the neighborhood of your workplace, isn't it?"

"Yeah, correct, I know its location. It's just across the road that runs past
our main labs building."

At those words, Daryl looked up, hopefulness showing in her eyes. Then she
stretched out her tiny fins towards Christine. "Take Daryl home?" came
her trilling voice, intensified by a pleading eye pattern.

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« Reply #106 on: September 18, 2009, 11:11:52 AM »

This posting concludes episode 11.

It has been renamed from its working title "Smoke and Mirrors" (since I didn't manage to get
to the events that will carry that title Smiley ) to its new title: Expansions and Miniatures.

"Expansions" refers to three mentioned incidents: the "Expansion Feedback Loop" the
transduction field in the generator might have undergone, the expansion of Operation
Homestead's inner circle, and the expansion Darwin's list by "Automato sapiens".
"Miniatures" of course refers to the four cute "mini-EVEs". Smiley

The episode introduced three characters that are "modelled" after forum users. Wayne Tannon
is "Wayne", Keith G. Sageman is "Level_Head", and Christine Shore is "Cri86".

The episode's page on my Wiki where I develop the story has now been opened for public
read/write access:

http://uplift.tiasoft.de/ShelbysArk11

If you wish to contribute to the story by proofreading the episode before I publish it on
fanfiction.net, feel free to fix any errors in spelling, grammar or similar you might find,
by simply editing the page. Smiley


                                            *  *  *

Richard Wells was brooding over some paperwork in his office when his intercom
announced an incoming voice transmission. He looked up and pressed a button.

"Wells here, hello Mr. Peterson."

"Good day Sir, please excuse the interruption. I just received a message from
Mr. Derring. There has been a certain development concerning the plant
evaluation robot that the CASE engineers are building."

"Yes? What is it?"

"Sir, I suggest a personal meeting with the Operation Homestead managers. It is
possible that we have a situation on our hands."

                                            *  *  *

A noisy commotion at her apartment door woke Kimberly from her sleep, albeit not
right away. With drowsy eyes she got up, only half-aware of where she was, and
stumbled towards the door.

"Kim, quickly, freshen up, pack your things and come on down. We need to get to
the L.A. CASE base right away!"

"Trevis, what the heck? I'm dead tired here, what's all this about?"

"You remember the white probe robot you did that fascinating interview with? The
one that made you play hide-and-seek?"

"Of course, how could I forget her. Such an adorable thing."

"Yeah, that's exactly the point. According to a CASE technician I've gotten off
the phone with just ten minutes ago, she's not a thing anymore."

Kim's eyes widened. From one moment to the next, all of her sleepiness had
vanished. "What do you mean? Are you saying that..."

Trevis moved his hand through the air in a half-circle, as if presenting an
imaginary headline that was printed there. "Robot attains sentience. Is science
allowed to tamper with nature?"

Ten seconds later, Kim had disappeared in the bathroom.

                                            *  *  *

"Aww, poor sweetie," Chris smiled and carefully tickled the little robot's arms
with a fingertip, earning a joyous trill in reply.

"If I recall correctly, there's an old model airplane field at Site 39. Maybe
Daryl came from your colleagues who just indulged in some boyish hobby after
all?"

The scientist giggled. "I wouldn't put it past them. They can still be boys
alright, just their toys have become way more expensive."

"Okay, little girl, hop on. We'll see if we can find whoever it is that needs a
lesson in orientation and navigation."

Alyx held out her arm in a pose one might use to invite a trained bird to land.
The robot smiled happily and hovered forward, then clinged onto the arm with her
tiny fins.

As they set off along the path to the monorail stop, Chris wondered why Daryl
had been the only one of the four robots that had come back to them to ask for
help.

                                 END OF EPISODE 11
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« Reply #107 on: September 18, 2009, 01:36:52 PM »

nice updates Smiley
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« Reply #108 on: June 27, 2010, 03:41:54 PM »

It's been 9 months since the last chapter update! Shocked Shocked I want more! Ich will mehr!!
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